Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, May 6, 2020
My animation about air pollution 4/5/20
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Hi Teah
ReplyDeleteI have enjoyed watching your animation. It was a really creative idea to use the smoke from the car to introduce the things that we can do to stop pollution (and I like how you used your face for the person!). You are already on track with this because you live so close to school that you can walk and not use a car! Animations are tricky because they take soooo long to make and it is a lot of duplicating to do the same slide over and over. To make your car move in the slide smoother you could duplicate it more times so that you can move the car a little bit each time. That way it would look more like it was being driven.
Keep up the amazing home learning work : )