Friday, June 14, 2019
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Kia ora Teah, I'm Isabella from marshland school!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your six sentence story, it must've been a real challenge!
Next time I would recommend expanding your words more, if you're struggling maybe you could look in a dictionary, for example "Beautiful" could be used differently.
Otherwise well done, I really enjoyed reading! If you could, what would you call your story?
~ Isabella