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Wednesday, July 31, 2019

Persuasive writing 31/7/19


On Tuesday the 30th of July Room 11 doing some Persuasive writing. So far we have done is try and make a ad like you see on YouTube. This is what I have done you can't actually get this kitten for real this is just random photos of kittens we also used theses 5 keys like Logo, Pathos, Ethos and Kairos. Anyway would you take this kitten?
Please comment and hope you enjoy this ad.     

3 comments:

  1. Kia ora Teah! What a wonderful ad! I really like how you included lots of detail however... next time maybe you could include how to "contact" them for extra detail. Other than that I really enjoyed your ad and it definitely persuaded me!

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    1. Thank you for your kindness maybe I could Edit it but other wise thank you.

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  2. Kia ora Teah I think your post is great. you described the cat's story very well .this reminds me of SPCA. I would defiantly buy the kitten. Maybe next time you could try using more pictures great job from Clio.

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