Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, July 31, 2019
Persuasive writing 31/7/19
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia ora Teah! What a wonderful ad! I really like how you included lots of detail however... next time maybe you could include how to "contact" them for extra detail. Other than that I really enjoyed your ad and it definitely persuaded me!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kindness maybe I could Edit it but other wise thank you.
DeleteKia ora Teah I think your post is great. you described the cat's story very well .this reminds me of SPCA. I would defiantly buy the kitten. Maybe next time you could try using more pictures great job from Clio.
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